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03 - Dr. Tomoaki Araide (1)

Okay, here's part 3. I re-read the last two parts...I did some..*bad* mistakes...argh...sorry!

Thanks for Melo who is supporting me (saying that my English fanfictions are better written than my German ^^""""). I guess you knew I would write about this person, didn't you? ;p

I hope you will enjoy this and someone else will read it... (it's only English!)
 

03 - Dr. Tomoaki Araide (1)
 

The room was full of clients. From the young to the old. They all wanted to be treated by their favourite doctor. The young men just passed the exam with special marks and as they liked his father very much they all wanted to be healed by his handsome son. He just cleaned his glasses, opened the door and welcomed the next one. A little girl who hurt her knee when she was playing outside. Gently he cared for her and she smiled. She was happy, because it didn't hurt anymore and she was able to move her knee again. She thanked and huged him, when she left. He smiled. The next person entered. An old man who had problems with his hand. Dr. Araide recognized very fast that the man had broken his thumb so he called the ambulance as he hadn't got the material for broken bones at his little hospital. The old man appreciated the fast work of the doctor and thanked him for his help. Again, smiling. He didn't has any assistant. He worked alone. He didn't need anyone for help. The next ones came into the room. A mother with her son. He got a bad headache. Tomoaki checked a few things and again, faster than any other doctor he got the clue. He gave him some medicine and the advice to sit properly as he was unrelaxed and that had caused the headache. The woman thanked him and told her son to do so. She also chatted a bit with the doctor, that she already had told her son to sit normally and not like a potatoe. Then they went away. Smiling. Smiling. Smiling. Everything was just fine. Any more wishes left?
 

Later he went to the Teitan highschool. This evening he would have to take care of the basketball team again. He loved this game so he was delighted to be allowed to help and train them. Ran Mouri and Sonoko Suzuki were among them. He liked both very much. Sometimes he met with them and spent them an icescream of a coffee. He was liked by all people around him. A perfect life, wasn't it?
 

But there was something wrong with the life of Mr. Tomoaki Araide, as he wasn't a real person anymore. At night he vanished from the world. At morning he was back. Did this man got a secret no one knew? Would someone ever know?!
 

After the training he went back. A few minutes later he got a call by a friend, professor Agasa. The little Ai-kun was ill and if he was able to come to check her. Immediately the doctor set off for the house of the professor. The little girl was lying in her bed, having high fever. He got a cold handkerchief and tried to lower the fever by laying it on her head. Misses Jody was near them, caring some fruits with her. 'Vitamin C' as she said. Sometimes this person really annoyed him. And then her voice...sometimes he wished to be dead instead of listening. Right now her 'Oh Sorry' was also pronounced in her special way that he totally disliked. Why was she there?! He had to work and to treat this girl nicely, for the moment. He already knew her secret and all he had to do was to create a net like a spider around her. The final moment was near. The moment to catch her and to make her cry. But not yet. There was a suspicious person following her. A dangerous person who he didn't want to meet in this way. Not at this event. But maybe he could use this teacher as his tool. 'Yes, this should really work if I use her.' he thought.
 

The professor just got a phone call. It was that little kid, the friend of Ai-kun who was worried about her. Somehow he liked this guy. He should also stay away from his plan as he would be able to destroy it. Jody-Sensei just left the room. Silence. Now he was able to take care of the little girl for himself. He hold her hand, touching her softly. She was only a little girl, but she was also the one who was responsible for just everything...



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Von:  SusyCute
2005-11-18T18:13:46+00:00 18.11.2005 19:13
Wow, this is really good! How did you get the idea?! It's so realistic, I love your writing style a lot!!
I can't wait until you continue, I am really curious!!
Von: abgemeldet
2004-02-22T19:40:32+00:00 22.02.2004 20:40
When did you write again?
This story is very good, I think so.
Shadowgirl


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