After a night of passion, Piccolo & Vegeta are left with growing feelings...
...for each other!
Lost times: A story of love
Erstellt: 12.10.2003
Letzte Änderung: 12.10.2003
Letzte Änderung: 12.10.2003
nicht abgeschlossen (40%)
Englisch
6214 Wörter, 6 Kapitel
6214 Wörter, 6 Kapitel
Thema: Dragonball
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
Kommentare (7 ) 6214 Wörter |
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| Kapitel 1 A plan, a break up and a new love.........maybe.........in time. | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
Kommentare (1) 1081 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Kapitel 2 Ready for take off | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
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| Kapitel 3 Rejection is a part of life.........SO DEAL!! | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
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| Kapitel 4 Flashbacks and the second message. | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
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| Kapitel 5 Talking | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
Kommentare (1) 952 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Kapitel 6 Feelings and confessions. | E: 12.10.2003 U: 12.10.2003 |
Kommentare (2) 1118 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (7)
Von: abgemeldet
15.10.2004 00:56
I'm just questioning, but is that really the end of the story? *can't believe that* Or are you just pausing on writing on? I found this story some months ago and I was so touched, that I'd love to know if I can trust to find some new chapters when I look it up next time or if there's really such an early end.
I like how you're writing, except that you sparred out the lemon scene, but hey that's also ok, 'cause it's not everything in a story. So, well then by and good luck and go on with your writing talent!
I like how you're writing, except that you sparred out the lemon scene, but hey that's also ok, 'cause it's not everything in a story. So, well then by and good luck and go on with your writing talent!
Oh, I almost forgot to leave a comment for this chapter ^^'
Yeah... I like it, what else?
XD
Yeah... I like it, what else?
XD
Oh yeah!
Damn, I love your fanfic!
Pleeeeeaaaaase continue soon!
I beg you!
*falls down to knees*
Oh pleeeeeaaaaaaaaseeeee!
Damn, I love your fanfic!
Pleeeeeaaaaase continue soon!
I beg you!
*falls down to knees*
Oh pleeeeeaaaaaaaaseeeee!
Gohan the psychologist... yeah!
I liked the moment, when Vegeta threw him agains the wall and startedt getting angry... "I don't have to PRETEND"
XD
I love it!
I liked the moment, when Vegeta threw him agains the wall and startedt getting angry... "I don't have to PRETEND"
XD
I love it!
Toooooooooo short!
The chapters are much too short XD
I'm so glad, that I don't have to wait for the continue...
The chapters are much too short XD
I'm so glad, that I don't have to wait for the continue...
Aaaaaah, what should I say?
I like the way you're writing XD
*doesn't care about the language of the comments I write (Englisch is never wrong)*
I like the way you're writing XD
*doesn't care about the language of the comments I write (Englisch is never wrong)*
Skandal!
So n tolles Pairing und dann... 0 Kommis! o_O''
Nur weils Englisch is? ist doch supergut geschrieben! Und leicht verständlich... also... wirklich....
Oh.. erm... should I write my comment in English? *saw, that all of your fanfics are English*
*confused*
Well... I think I'll read and left something after the end... or... after every chapter?
*drop*
Nja, I like the story XD
So n tolles Pairing und dann... 0 Kommis! o_O''
Nur weils Englisch is? ist doch supergut geschrieben! Und leicht verständlich... also... wirklich....
Oh.. erm... should I write my comment in English? *saw, that all of your fanfics are English*
*confused*
Well... I think I'll read and left something after the end... or... after every chapter?
*drop*
Nja, I like the story XD
