Summertime
Erstellt: 19.09.2014
Letzte Änderung: 20.09.2014
Letzte Änderung: 20.09.2014
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414 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
414 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: the GazettE
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Summertime | E: 20.09.2014 U: 20.09.2014 |
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Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (3)
This made me awfully sad, you kinda can feel the melancholy. And even though this was short lived I loved every word of it. The way Uruha touched him at the end, don't mind my heart shattering to pieces man T__T Loved the way you wrote this, and even though it's been a long time since you've uploaded this, I still wanted to show u my appreciation :) <3 Thank you for this!
Thank you! I'm glad people still enjoy my writing, even though I haven't been active for quite a while now ... :)
Please take good care of your heart ;)
Please take good care of your heart ;)
Von: abgemeldet
20.09.2014 12:43
Oh no, hell no.
That's way too sad, too much melancholy ._. I was in a great mood when I opened your new FF but now I'm kinda depressed. The bad thing about your way of writing is that I feel the way the charakters feel while reading. When they're having a nice time in a dark corner it's great because I feel the tension and the excitement between them, too (was that comma right? ._.) but when one of them is sad or melancholy like here I feel this emotion, too (and again a comma before a 'too' ._.) T___T
Nevertheless I like this short drabble :) But I hope some of the other ones will be a bit more positive xD'
That's way too sad, too much melancholy ._. I was in a great mood when I opened your new FF but now I'm kinda depressed. The bad thing about your way of writing is that I feel the way the charakters feel while reading. When they're having a nice time in a dark corner it's great because I feel the tension and the excitement between them, too (was that comma right? ._.) but when one of them is sad or melancholy like here I feel this emotion, too (and again a comma before a 'too' ._.) T___T
Nevertheless I like this short drabble :) But I hope some of the other ones will be a bit more positive xD'
I'm glad you feel the emotions :D Though , I didn't intend to depress you....
The coma before the 'too' is optional. It is a rule to write one but it isn't followed so strictly anymore, so you can decide whether you want to write one or not
The coma before the 'too' is optional. It is a rule to write one but it isn't followed so strictly anymore, so you can decide whether you want to write one or not
Antwort von: abgemeldet
20.09.2014 13:06
Thank you so much. That helps me a lot^^
You're welcome :)
