Trust
Erstellt: 14.11.2011
Letzte Änderung: 14.11.2011
Letzte Änderung: 14.11.2011
abgeschlossen
Englisch
1067 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
1067 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Pairings: Reita x Ruki
Yes it is my first try in english. I came home and had to write it down. If there is anything to complain about expect the storyline, tell me, I won't bite, I promise ❤
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| Kapitel 1 Love | E: 14.11.2011 U: 14.11.2011 |
Kommentare (2) 1066 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Miyavi
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Reita
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Ruki
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (2)
Wie kannst du mir das antun? *Englisch anhass* xD
Jedenfalls kriegst du nen deutschen Kommi!
Ich mag die Formulierungen, insofern ich finde, es würde sich auf Deutsch gut anhören. Keine Ahnung, ob das im Englischen so geht/passt. XD"
Und irwie ist das Ganze rührend. x3 Well~ >_< ja. xD
Jedenfalls kriegst du nen deutschen Kommi!
Ich mag die Formulierungen, insofern ich finde, es würde sich auf Deutsch gut anhören. Keine Ahnung, ob das im Englischen so geht/passt. XD"
Und irwie ist das Ganze rührend. x3 Well~ >_< ja. xD
Von: abgemeldet
14.11.2011 19:34
*purrs*
God, I love that *o*
Why does it seem so glamorous?
I bet because of the cover, I really bet! O.O ❤
Well, I didn't find mistakes, just some things I would formulate in a different way. ❤
But one thing did jump into my eye. You wrote "an year". It's actually supposed to be "a year" (Oh, of course you know that) I just mentioned because you do that quite often. It's only "an" with a, e, i, o or u as the first letter. Of course you know that *grins*
God, I love that *o*
Why does it seem so glamorous?
I bet because of the cover, I really bet! O.O ❤
Well, I didn't find mistakes, just some things I would formulate in a different way. ❤
But one thing did jump into my eye. You wrote "an year". It's actually supposed to be "a year" (Oh, of course you know that) I just mentioned because you do that quite often. It's only "an" with a, e, i, o or u as the first letter. Of course you know that *grins*
