There aren't enough Supernatural Storys, never. So I tried, but given the fact most of the fanfictions were written for serveral communities on Livejournal.com, they're going to be in English. I still hope you will read and review them.
You can leave it german if you want, I'm not picky.
Pointers for grammer and spelling mistakes would be helpful.
The Oneshots will be short and the characters/pairing will vary from chapter to chapter.
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Es gibt einfach nicht genug Supernatural Geschichten. Also habe ich mich daran versucht, doch da ich sie für mehrere Communities auf Livejournal geschrieben habe, werden sie auf Englisch sein. Ich hoffe dennoch dass ihr sie lesen und kommentieren werdet.
Selbstverständlich könntet ihr besagtes Review auch auf Deutsch hinterlassen, ich bin nicht wählerisch.
Besonders nicht, da Hinweise auf Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler helfen würden.
Die Oneshots werden verhältnismäßig kurz sein und die Charaktere/Pairings sich von Kapitel zu Kapitel unterscheiden.
Blood and Grace
Erstellt: 16.06.2011
Letzte Änderung: 15.08.2011
Letzte Änderung: 15.08.2011
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Englisch
5203 Wörter, 8 Kapitel
5203 Wörter, 8 Kapitel
Thema: Supernatural (TV-Serie)
Genre: One-Shot
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 16.06.2011 U: 15.08.2011 |
Kommentare (1 ) 5203 Wörter |
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| Blood and Grace [Lucifer x Gabriel] | E: 17.06.2011 U: 16.06.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 614 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| My Big Bright Bubble [Sam x Gabriel] | E: 18.06.2011 U: 18.06.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 554 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Our Last Divide [Michael, Raphael] | E: 20.06.2011 U: 20.06.2011 |
Kommentare (1) 890 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Something Real [Sam x Gabriel] Adult | E: 23.06.2011 U: 23.06.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 550 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| The 'Love wins, Love always wins' Argument [Gabriel] | E: 13.07.2011 U: 13.07.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 490 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Who are you? [Sam, Lucifer] | E: 04.08.2011 U: 04.08.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 634 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Trust me [Sam x Gabriel] | E: 11.08.2011 U: 11.08.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 437 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Limpiar Algo [Michael, Sam] | E: 15.08.2011 U: 15.08.2011 |
Kommentare (0) 1009 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Sam Winchester
Von: mangacrack Serie: Supernatural Stil: Skizze
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (1)
Von: Allie
26.06.2011 20:59
Woah! I'm really thrilled!
I was so surprised when I saw this fanfiction! Usually I read SN FF's at fanfiction.net... And like I said, I was so surprised to see an English Fanfiction!
And so I write a English comment... (Even though, my English sucks xD)
I only read the third chapter, 'cause I'm not a big fan of slash couples.
You really did a good job on Micheals feelings, and it was fun to read.
I really enjoyed it.
But there were some flaws...
1. "Michael knew Raphael was also gazing down at earth, but he also feel how he looked at him from time to time."
The first part I understand, but "..he also feel how he looked at him..."?.
That doesn't make sense and I can't figure out what you intended to write... Maybe "...he also felt how he looked at him..."??
2. “I'll bring things to end, Raphael”, Michael said. “I'll.”
Actually, It's quite alright. But I hate the way you wrote the last part. "I'll." ... I think it would be better if you had wrote "I will." because "I'll" doesn't sound good. If it were in a long sentence, then I wouldn't have a problem with it...
3. "But Michael knew Raphael meant the plan he hadn't told anyone yet."
I don't think that this sentence is logical xD.... Well, how does Michael know of the plan if Raphael hasn't told him yet? Or for that matter, anyone. It would have been better if you had wrote this sentence differently...
But anyway...
That was it!
Yeah... And again: I really, really loved this story!
It was interesting! (I would love it if you would write one with Castiel... xD... I'm a really big Fan of Fledgling!Castiel... but nevermind xD)
Love~
Allie.
I was so surprised when I saw this fanfiction! Usually I read SN FF's at fanfiction.net... And like I said, I was so surprised to see an English Fanfiction!
And so I write a English comment... (Even though, my English sucks xD)
I only read the third chapter, 'cause I'm not a big fan of slash couples.
You really did a good job on Micheals feelings, and it was fun to read.
I really enjoyed it.
But there were some flaws...
1. "Michael knew Raphael was also gazing down at earth, but he also feel how he looked at him from time to time."
The first part I understand, but "..he also feel how he looked at him..."?.
That doesn't make sense and I can't figure out what you intended to write... Maybe "...he also felt how he looked at him..."??
2. “I'll bring things to end, Raphael”, Michael said. “I'll.”
Actually, It's quite alright. But I hate the way you wrote the last part. "I'll." ... I think it would be better if you had wrote "I will." because "I'll" doesn't sound good. If it were in a long sentence, then I wouldn't have a problem with it...
3. "But Michael knew Raphael meant the plan he hadn't told anyone yet."
I don't think that this sentence is logical xD.... Well, how does Michael know of the plan if Raphael hasn't told him yet? Or for that matter, anyone. It would have been better if you had wrote this sentence differently...
But anyway...
That was it!
Yeah... And again: I really, really loved this story!
It was interesting! (I would love it if you would write one with Castiel... xD... I'm a really big Fan of Fledgling!Castiel... but nevermind xD)
Love~
Allie.
