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Between The Sun And The Moon

Ein Gedicht das mir mal eingefallen ist. ^^

Etwas, für das mich- wie ich zugeben muss- die Inspiration auf einmal ganz schön gekitzelt hat. ^-^ Eigentlich war es nur für mein ganz eigenes Vergnügen bestimmt doch ich hab mich jetzt doch entschlossen es hier reinzusetzen genauso wie ich denke, dass es eigentlich doch, ziemliches Zutara ist ^^!
 

Naja, ich hoffe es gefällt euch so einigermaßen und ihr versteht alles^-^y

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Between The Sun And The Moon
 

She was a woman

She emerged from the bluest of seas,

The view of a goddess, the power of wisdom she wields.
 

He was a man

Born from the sun in the east,

The posture of a king, the everlasting fire that does not cease.
 

Together they marched and opposites they were
 

In the early of dawn, he leads the living sun

In the evening she defies, the light of the moon her own
 

A force to divide, a passion to match

A furry to claim, a passion to shame
 

And as they wielded, water and fire was forced to steam,

And in the mist, the feud was drawn to an end as it seems.
 

It was in a minute, as the fire lord tripped on the ground,

and the water sword hesitated, unsure as if to bound.
 

She sees weakness in this creature for the first time in life

And as she stares, mesmerized, at the strong fallen form,

she did not notice the leg, did not notice the knife,

that he puts out of nowhere and disarms her in turn.
 

Now she is panting, with his hand on her throat,

and his golden eyes stare into hers, brows drawn, as if to frown.
 

He asked why she faltered; she could have ended his life

And all the while not once, did he lower his knife

She averted her eyes, said that even he was life;

No more than a whisper, but suddenly he found it was nice.
 

His stare searched her eyes, so blue unlike his own,

it was a good colour, he decided then

It reminded him of home

Of the endless ocean that pooled upon soft white sand

And then without his notice, he lowered his hand.
 

He retreats a step- blue eyes wide,

his sword again in his grasp, but unclear to decide

His gaze the look of fire, but now averted from her eyes

Suddenly there was no motion, just an unworldly quite.
 

It was the water goddess now, that searched the fire god’s eyes,

and all there was, was ember

And just like that it seems (her equal now)

at the same time so tender;

as his eyes again lifted and bore into her own.
 

How long had they fought like this

both asked themselves, now just at time

How long since they forgot, how long since they missed.
 

It was suddenly so clear to them,

As they gazed at each other, no words spoken

And something sprang to life just then,

just a sparkle in their eyes, but undeniable awoken.
 

A prickle in their fingertips, and both parties stared,

For never did they feel like this,

Like they belonged to this earth;

That was now their own, reduced to them,

and the fire lord stared.
 

Then never in his mortal life,

did he saw beauty just like that back then

Her graceful dress the purest white

and slender curves, never seen before,

were now exposed before his eyes.
 

His golden eyes drank her in,

and she couldn’t help but shudder

Never did look his eyes like that at her,

As if the deepness was putting her under.
 

And as she stared,

he saw the same hunger in her eyes

The same passion,

The same fire likewise.
 

And it drove him to edge,

An edge he had never known before just yet

And without his knowing- not of carelessness-

he moved and set his foot forward a step;

Slowly like the predator he was

and she shuddered again, wondering what it was

His catlike grace, the jet black hair,

Or his pools of amber that now stared so intensely at her.
 

His hand reached forward slightly,

fingers tight, as if to bend

But cupped her cheek so gently,

in his rough, callused hand.
 

Her eyes fluttered and his mouth drew near,

Brushed her hair, her neck, and finally her ear
 

Is this how you want it he whispered huskily,

and she couldn’t help but nod;

His breath fanned warmly on her skin

and her eyes fluttered close.
 

He was gentle, and for the first time in life,

did they taste what they opposed.
 

A crescendo just, as lips met lips

but a moment not to fade

Just a moment’s touch of eternity

but the connections had been made
 

So few was the distance just back then
 

Between the sun and the moon…
 


 


 

(16.3.06)
 

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16. März 2006, weil ich das Gedicht an jenem Tag beendet hatte ^^

Und ich hoffe ihr hinterlasst vielleicht ein klitzekleines Kommi ^_^



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Von:  Fresa-del-bosque
2008-02-07T19:30:27+00:00 07.02.2008 20:30
...wun-der-schön!!! Echt ein ganz tolles gedicht, ich wünschte, ich könnte so etwas - ich bin zwar gut in Englisch, aber ich kann nicht mal in Deutsch anständig reimen, tja...^^
Von: abgemeldet
2007-07-24T19:21:40+00:00 24.07.2007 21:21
Moin moin,
das ist ein wunderbares Werk, hat was wunderschön fließendes und zieht mich wirklich mit, so wie Gedichte wirken sollten.
Auch wenn man es nicht als Zutara liest, ist es unglaublich.
Es grüßt,
die Elster.
Von:  Willow
2007-03-29T20:17:49+00:00 29.03.2007 22:17
ich würd dir nur schon allein für dein talent hundert kommis schreiben. das ist wirklich sehr schön!
Von: abgemeldet
2007-01-28T13:12:28+00:00 28.01.2007 14:12
Mir is en Schauer übern Rücken gekommen.
Find die Kombie auch gut.
ECHT KLASSE!!!!!!!!!
Von: abgemeldet
2007-01-23T21:29:11+00:00 23.01.2007 22:29
*jubel* *begeistert sei* bis jetzt hab ich nur deine naruto-ffs gelesen, aber ich bin auch zutara fan und das hier ist echt wahnsinn!
richtig schön geschrieben.
Von: abgemeldet
2007-01-14T09:18:54+00:00 14.01.2007 10:18
Joa, ganz schön Zutara sogar.
Aber mir gefällt super gut.
Zutara forever! *muhahahaha*
Jedenfalls ist es ein wirklich schönes Gedicht!
Von: abgemeldet
2006-12-10T19:25:05+00:00 10.12.2006 20:25
nyyaaaaaa!!!><
so schön!!><
ich finds wirklich sehr schön!!><
wuuuunderschön!!><
*nich die worte findet*
einfach nur hammersgeil!!!><

lg
Maora
Von:  tiriki93
2006-12-04T20:22:05+00:00 04.12.2006 21:22
wooow!
echt wunderschön geschrieben^^
großes lob
Von: abgemeldet
2006-11-05T12:21:12+00:00 05.11.2006 13:21
Ich finds toll, sehr schön geschrieben, hat was episch poetisches.
Ich bin allerdings kein Zutara-shipper, dennoch hat das Gedicht was.

Das Englisch ist manchmal etwas holprig oder nicht ganz korrekt, z.B.
"So few was the distance just back then"
müsste eigentlich "so short was the distance" heißen, oder ich kenne den Ausdruck so halt einfach nicht.

Mein Schulenglisch ist inzwischen auch 6 Jahre her. ^^'


Ansonsten wirklich toll, auch wenns sich nicht immer reimt, aber das tut dem Gedicht keinen Abbruch.


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