Darkness cannot drive out darkness
Erstellt: 25.03.2014
Letzte Änderung: 18.04.2014
Letzte Änderung: 18.04.2014
abgeschlossen
Englisch
42183 Wörter, 10 Kapitel
42183 Wörter, 10 Kapitel
Thema: Dragonball
Regardless what it was, he never felt it before and he already hated it. Feelings… apart from hate, anger and pride he hated all the others. Fear… that was ok if others felt it towards him. Frustration, amusement and even shame; he also experienced those. But this, whatever this was, wasn’t any of those. He leaned closer so their faces were only inches apart as he desperately wanted to understand it.
Fanfic lesen
| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 25.03.2014 U: 18.04.2014 |
Kommentare (9 ) 42183 Wörter |
|
| Kapitel 1 Chapter 1 | E: 27.03.2014 U: 27.03.2014 |
Kommentare (1) 3830 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 2 Chapter 2 | E: 30.03.2014 U: 30.03.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 3650 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 3 Chapter 3 | E: 31.03.2014 U: 31.03.2014 |
Kommentare (1) 4177 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 4 Chapter 4 | E: 02.04.2014 U: 02.04.2014 |
Kommentare (1) 4418 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 5 Chapter 5 | E: 05.04.2014 U: 05.04.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 5567 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 6 Chapter 6 | E: 09.04.2014 U: 09.04.2014 |
Kommentare (1) 3351 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 7 Chapter 7 | E: 11.04.2014 U: 11.04.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 5272 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 8 Chapter 8 | E: 12.04.2014 U: 12.04.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 3500 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 9 Chapter 9 | E: 15.04.2014 U: 15.04.2014 |
Kommentare (1) 4240 Wörter abgeschlossen |
|
| Kapitel 10 Chapter 10 | E: 18.04.2014 U: 18.04.2014 |
Kommentare (4) 4178 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (9)
Von: Daskleine
24.01.2016 19:37
Love that Story.. my englisch is not really good but i understand.. thanks.. now i look at your other Storys..
Great job! I loooovee your story! <3 :D
You're such a great author!
You're such a great author!
Great job! I loooovee your story! <3 :D
You're such a great author!
You're such a great author!
Just four words: wonderful and suuuuper sweet!
I love this chapter, no, the whole story was great :D
Bra is such a cutie, though with a bad tongue, but, hey, look at her parents ;)
It's sad, that this was the last chapter, I could read dozens of them, but it was a satisfying ending. I would like to read more stories from you :)
May the muse be faithful to you ^__^
(and I hope, this was correct english :'D)
I love this chapter, no, the whole story was great :D
Bra is such a cutie, though with a bad tongue, but, hey, look at her parents ;)
It's sad, that this was the last chapter, I could read dozens of them, but it was a satisfying ending. I would like to read more stories from you :)
May the muse be faithful to you ^__^
(and I hope, this was correct english :'D)
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it :) As I wrote at the end of the story, I'm planning to upload my new story later on, which is not entirely done yet, but it will have a similar length and (I'm hoping) a similar quality :D
I love your story! :)
can't wait for the next chapter!
can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you very much for the review! It's always good to have a feedback on my story :)
I love it :)
can't wait to read more!
can't wait to read more!
Warte gespannt aufs nächste Kapitel! :)
Ich liebe deinen Schreibstil - nur manchmal finde ich es schwer mit den Zeitsprüngen hinter her zu kommen. Da geht ein Satz plötzlich in drei Tage später über :D
Ich liebe deinen Schreibstil - nur manchmal finde ich es schwer mit den Zeitsprüngen hinter her zu kommen. Da geht ein Satz plötzlich in drei Tage später über :D
Ich bin ja so "gut". Ich hab' erst jetzt bemerkt dass ich hier eine Antwort schreiben kann :D Also vielen Dank für die Bewertung!
Hi
I've read your story so far and you have a good spelling style! I like it and I enjoyed reading your story, it's interessing and the charakters are very... well, IC :D
Please continue, I would like to read more of your version of "the 3 years".
Just a tip: there are a few typing errors, not many, but maybe you want to correct them?
Greetings!
I've read your story so far and you have a good spelling style! I like it and I enjoyed reading your story, it's interessing and the charakters are very... well, IC :D
Please continue, I would like to read more of your version of "the 3 years".
Just a tip: there are a few typing errors, not many, but maybe you want to correct them?
Greetings!
Hi! As I have some figuring out to do how the page is working, I'm only just got to the point to reply :P Thank you very much for the review and it's good to know that you like the story. I pretty much enjoyed writing it, but it doesn't mean that others find it entertaining or good to read :D
Yeah, I definitely want to correct the typo-s, the more I read the chapters the more I find, so eventually I will get there I think.
Yeah, I definitely want to correct the typo-s, the more I read the chapters the more I find, so eventually I will get there I think.
Love it! Need more soon! *___*
