Reality bites
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 26.04.2012
Letzte Änderung: 26.04.2012
Letzte Änderung: 26.04.2012
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Englisch
737 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
737 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Detektiv Conan
Genre: Mystery
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 26.04.2012 U: 26.04.2012 |
Kommentare (1) 756 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Great finally someone who writes in english just like me.
I somehow get the feeling your not much of a Ran advocate. But Shiho really got the message across.
Moreover you greatly convey Shiho's commitment for Shinichi. Intensely sentimental & profound.
One question remains: When you wrote Chris, did you mean Vermouth, or did I misinterpreted something? Ah, and it shoudld be Jodie & Yūsaku not Jody & Yousako!
I would take mischievous pleasure, if I would come upon a comment on your part.
Constructive criticism dearly wished-for.
Keep up your good work!
Yours sincerely,
Zimtphilosophie
I somehow get the feeling your not much of a Ran advocate. But Shiho really got the message across.
Moreover you greatly convey Shiho's commitment for Shinichi. Intensely sentimental & profound.
One question remains: When you wrote Chris, did you mean Vermouth, or did I misinterpreted something? Ah, and it shoudld be Jodie & Yūsaku not Jody & Yousako!
I would take mischievous pleasure, if I would come upon a comment on your part.
Constructive criticism dearly wished-for.
Keep up your good work!
Yours sincerely,
Zimtphilosophie
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