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~komplette Fanfic~ V: 17.05.2011
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Prolog Prolog E: 17.05.2011
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Kapitel 1 Die Nacht vor der Schlacht E: 21.05.2011
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Kapitel 2 Enthüllungen Adult E: 01.06.2011
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Kapitel 3 Vorbereitungen E: 12.06.2011
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Kapitel 4 Die Schlacht beginnt E: 26.06.2011
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Kapitel 5 Das Feldlazarett E: 04.07.2011
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Kapitel 6 Machtkampf E: 30.07.2011
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Kapitel 7 Der Abschied E: 10.08.2011
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Kapitel 8 Der Kommandant E: 19.08.2011
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Kapitel 9 Gegen die Vergangenheit E: 10.09.2011
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Kapitel 10 Auf dem Weg E: 06.10.2011
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Kapitel 11 Der Überfall E: 04.11.2011
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Kapitel 12 Königliche Führsprache E: 06.01.2012
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Kapitel 13 Unfreiwillige Weggefährten E: 12.04.2012
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Kapitel 14 Gottes vergessenes Land E: 20.05.2012
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Kapitel 15 Unangenehme Überraschungen E: 05.08.2012
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Kapitel 16 Donnergrollen E: 23.09.2012
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Kapitel 17 Lord Rochefort E: 18.11.2012
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Kapitel 18 Die andere Frau E: 28.02.2013
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Von:  laety
2014-03-26T16:26:31+00:00 26.03.2014 17:26
Hallo, Wie lange habe ich lese Ihre fics aber das erste Mal, dass ich einen Kommentar zu schreiben, weil ich nicht Deutsch sprechen. Sorry, wenn dies nicht lesbar aber ich habe einen Übersetzer ... Ich wollte dir sagen, dass ich ein Fan von Ihrem fics war. Dieser ist großartig und ich hoffe wirklich, dass Sie weiterhin schreiben ... Ich freue mich auf mehr ... Was passiert, Athos und Aramis? Und Amaury? Ist Rochefort wird das Geheimnis der aramis verraten? Nochmals vielen Dank für Ihre schöne fics und sehr bald hoffe ich.
Von:  Tach
2013-03-09T14:52:26+00:00 09.03.2013 15:52
Ich fühle mich immer herrlich sprachlos, wenn ich hier einen Kommentar schreiben will. Ich bin nach wie vor sehr gespannt, wie sich die Beziehung der beiden entwickelt und welche Wendungen Rochefort und diese Verflossene der Geschichte geben, aber am meisten habe ich mich über den Schluss dieses Kapitels gefreut :)
Von:  citosol
2013-03-03T07:26:05+00:00 03.03.2013 08:26
I always feel butterflies in my belly when I read one of your chapters! I have to admit that because the terrible translation google makes there are some things I don't understand: i.e. google makes mistakes by exchanging "his"'s and "him"'s with her"'s so I often doesn't know who's speaking or who's acting... :( (sob!) but I totally get the general meaning, and I love it!
I love how Athos is slowly falling for her, despite what his mind says to him, and I'm waiting for the moment in which they will stop to have sex (the urge, the dark room, the hunger) and will start to make love...the same hunger but with eye to eye, heart to heart contact... -____-
And now: Rochefort. I adore how you are make him acting: I love Rochefort being "in love" with Aramis. Or better, being totally obssessed by her without even knowing it. I think he's gong to be very confused and aroused! And what is going to happen when he will discover Athos/Aramis relationship?? Hmmm...yummy....
The thing I definitely didn't get in this chapter (google's fault) is the whole queen's ladies thing: there's the first one so Athos-alike that you made me think she can be his sister (?) that and the one Athos was looking at, but I didn't get the meaning behind the words...I guess I will discover more things later! :)

Thanks for this chapter, I'm always happy when I see you've updated!
Von:  Kira_Lira
2013-03-01T05:54:17+00:00 01.03.2013 06:54
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^, The things are getting difficult for Aramis, like a nightmare, instead of feeling safe at home, all who know her secret are against it returned to service, but do not offer a better solution, she feels trapped, audience with the king was not better, he had to against what happened, to the laughter of the nobles, in a moment seemed to have the support of Athos, during the hearing, to improve things, met new conquest of Athos, if no doubt why there are rumors that at least seems to recover his house, but has no money to pay the rent, or to furnish it, but did not want to go home Athos, to improve their status of mind, Athos blame him cheating, while almost did mourn, I think Aramis is thinking it would have been better to have died in the attack, Athos is confused by not knowing he feels for Aramis, but that does not stop to sleep with she, without a compromise was lucky last time, but what if this time become pregnant, and if Athos does not change its attitude with her, going to lose, Rochefort seems to be interested in her, at first revealed no his secret, as are things with Athos, can seek refuge and comfort with the count, that does not think he likes the musketeer, I forgot to also lack another suitor, Dr. Amaury, Aramis could choose to be a lady the queen and flirt with the nobles, see what you think has to Athos, I hope the next chapter, please do not hesitate much, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^.

Von:  Kira_Lira
2012-11-22T00:38:31+00:00 22.11.2012 01:38
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^, Please leave us much time with suspense, a chapter with many conflicts, waking looks Aramis Athos, is a rare sight, always saw him as a man now known to be a woman who falls for the second time her desire, sees trimmed with him, but do not know how to treat it, not like the others, does not dare to see her naked in the morning, even the wish, and wakes Aramis still has a hangover from drinking, she not know how to behave with Athos after that night, he will feel rejected by their attitude?, your friends this happy to see her alive, Aramis is going to talk to the captain, apparently the pain it caused him to lose affection Aramis health, now has a second chance to make things right with her, he does not want to remain a musketeer, does not want to risk it, especially if you see that a new war is coming, but Aramis has nothing more that life, she does not agree with the wishes of the master, they discuss reproached Aramis has not right to meddle in his life, but he knows how to handle it, she did not disobey an order, sends her home confinement, plus wants to heal his leg, not a cure yet, but first go to the king, to report that she is alive, in terms Rocheford, the assets have to be of the nobility, had no problems going to their home but if in their position of captain, Cardinal tells what happened since the incident and its aftermath, the hatred of the two men against Athos is now the king's favorite was swift, Rocheford will say to Cardinal discovered the secret of Aramis, Athos for revenge, or keep it for himself, the night he came to her house maid asked a blonde virgin, do not remember, perhaps unconsciously is that you want to Aramis, after having discovered the truth?, how long it will take to try to be with the real Aramis also not lose the opportunity to hurt Athos, if Count learns that Aramis and Athos was as will, that will Athos learns if the captain does not want to remain a musketeer Aramis, but the captain would not want it if Aramis as a musketeer, where the will to rule, he wants to return to being a lady, I hope not late update, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^.
Von:  citosol
2012-11-18T12:30:48+00:00 18.11.2012 13:30
OMG!
This chapter was SO interesting! You always make me not wanting to stop reading, I'd read you forever! This story is so complicated: the whole Athos' story, the relationship between him, his father, the king, Aramis, and now Rochefort and the cardinal...but especially the thing with Aramis: she cannot be the usual Athos'woman. She is dramatically different, and I know Athos will soon realize it!
And now Rochefort: what's he gonna say to Richelieu? How are they going to behave with Athos?
Oh gosh, things are going to become really complicated, I fear. (AND I LOVE IT!! SO MUCH!!!)
I really want an happy ending between Athos and Aramis, but I feel it's gonna be a difficult road...

Thanks SO much for having updated, I really love this story, and I'm so curious to see what you've in mind!

Hope to see you really soon!
Von:  blubbie
2012-09-27T22:08:22+00:00 28.09.2012 00:08
Oh wow....das ging irgenwie schneller als ich erwartet hatte XD Nicht dass cih mich beschweren will doer so...nein nein, keine Sorge! Ich teile nur irgendwie Athos Meinung, dass es vielleicht nciht so gut war, dass in halb betrunkenem Zustand zu tun...das gibt bestimmt Probleme irgendeiner Art am nächsten Tag. Andererseits hat Athos ihr den Wein gegeben...ind em geschwächten Zustand in dem sie war. Also guter Gastgeber hin oder her, da war seine Intelligenz ein wenig eingeschlafen. Andererseits hat er vermutlich viel zu ehrenvoll gedacht....na ja zu viel halt. Wie er eben so ist...immer korrekt udn Gefühle für Aramis unterdrücken. aber Wein hin oder her....ich staune trotzdem, dass Aramis nach den Strapazen und dem BAd nciht einfach ins Bett gefallen ist und eienn auf "Stein" gemacht hätte..stattdessen irgendwoher die Energie genommen hat Athos zu verführen (noch einmal: keine Kritik, ich finds großartig und habe ein fettes Grinsen im Gesicht, dass Athos das widerfährt muahahaha). Wieauchimmer ich glaube das nächste Kapitel wird nicht einfach werden für die beiden. Und vllt kommt das mit der Schwangerschaft ja nun doch noch...*räusper*....und der arme Amaury wird Hebamme....
Von:  blubbie
2012-09-27T21:49:42+00:00 27.09.2012 23:49
Oohhh!!!!!!!!!!! Ich war viel zu lange nicht emhr hier und jetzt sind gleich zwei Kapitel hochgeladen. Ich freu mich hier einen Keks.^^ und Aramis hat es geschafft nach Paris zu kommen. Ich musste ja so grinsen, als sie zu sich nach Hause gehen wollte. Obwohl sie mir eigtl ziemlich leid tat. Das ist echt bitter...nach allem was sie durchgemacht hat plötzlich auf der Straße zu sein. Und dass sie Amaury so hat stehen lassen...wo will der Ärmste denn jetzt hin??????? Ich kann sie zwar irgendwie verstehen, aber...aber.... Na ja, der wird schon wieder auftauchen, schätze ich mal.
Und dann so ein Glück, dass sie alle am Essenstisch bei den Bonancieuxs erwischt hat...göttlich!!!!! Aber wenn dass sie noch Kraft für falschen Stolz hatte, wundert mich ja. Bzw. ich bewundere ihre Energie. Und Porthos der total das Essen vergisst...hihihi. Den Ärmsten sollte sie jetzt aber langsam mal einweihen. Immerhin weiß sie, dass rochefort es weiß...und auch wenn er nichts sagt, finde ich es ncoiht gut, wenn der Feind (das ist er ja jetzt wieder) etwas so wichtiges über jemanden wei udn der beste Freund nicht! D'Artagnan wusste es doch in Deiner Geschichte oder? Ich glaube die Frage nach der Schwangerschaft hat sich auch erledigt...nach drei monaten Strapazen wäre es doch ein etwas größeres Wunder, wennd er Fetus das überlebt hätte.
Aber hey....sie wohnt jetzt bei ATHOS ....hehehe....und ich kann direkt im nächsten Kapitel darüber lesen!!!!!!!! Ich bin dann mal weg tüdelü :)
Von:  Kira_Lira
2012-09-25T06:35:54+00:00 25.09.2012 08:35
Hello! like this? ^ ___ ^, you thought we have in a while, a chapter ardent but confused, do not understand the attitude of Aramis!, I thought I had learned from the last time that you should not drink for courage to be with Athos after their first night she fell ill, she cursed herself for what happened that night was hurt, time is driving him to do, but if she felt bad because your body, then it is not desirable to Athos , is very thin, anemic, weak, headache, and can think of seducing a man if perhaps strange for some time, but not the time, this is the first time you see her as a woman Athos, without the clothing Aramis, Athos is respected, to give her space, but I think he had to sleep somewhere else and not with her, as it happens also give wine, she is very weak, it was logical to go up, the worst case is the rejection of Athos, but that is what will happen in the morning, yes, this time they may end up with no one to interrupt, but what are your feelings of the two, if Aramis does not feel attractive because force things, is going to hurt more than before, the worst thing is that it has to go, please do not delay in updating, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^.

Von:  citosol
2012-09-24T19:31:20+00:00 24.09.2012 21:31
Hi!
Welcome back, I'm REALLY glad you've updated this story!! <3
Your Aramis is really determinated to seduce Athos. Whatever it takes. And I'm not sure she's doing that because she loves him or because she wants to prove him something. Sweet Aramis...she deserves loves SO MUCH and she hide it under a hard mask.
Your Athos is amazing: he's just like the one I imagine in my mind: very self controlled, he seems made of stone, but inside he burns, and he strongly fights to hide it.
Omg, they're so similar!
Luckily Aramis doesn't think too much and acts (maybe the wine helped her out? ;P) so the final suggestion is very well described and placed: I cannot stop thinking about those two while "fighting" on that bed... *______*
And now just one question remains...
Who's the one at the beginning of the chapter????!

You keep me on the edge of the chair waiting for your next updating...I want to know what is going to happen between Athos and Aramis, I want to know how they are going to face the normal life and if they will end in bed together again and maybe if Athos will hear "that" voice in his heart that says "Fool, you LOVE her!"

>__<. How I love their little misunderstanding!!


Thanks SO MUCH for this chapter, and hope to see you soon!
Xoxoxox