Title: Fight in Kokuritsu
Pairing: JunMa
Genre: Fluff,
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: They're unfortunatly not mine ;___;
Note: I'm not a native english speaker, so please don't sue me for grammar flaws ne. I know the title sucks, but I kinda can't think of a proper title.. written during lunch break at work. Inspired by Sery's Sakuraiba ff xD (LOL)
Fight in Kokuritsu
Erstellt: 16.09.2009
Letzte Änderung: 16.09.2009
Letzte Änderung: 16.09.2009
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Englisch
443 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
443 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Arashi (Band), Toma Ikuta
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Fight in Kokuritsu | E: 16.09.2009 U: 16.09.2009 |
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Von: abgemeldet
14.10.2009 17:19
Thanks so much :D I'm so happy to get comments <3
Von: abgemeldet
14.10.2009 14:50
You've got a simple style of telling and I like that very much. ^^ The chapter also could have been longer, the curiousity just had been waken up.
I think your english is great - I had no problems with the vocabulary as a text of a native speaker would provide. ^^
I was also thinking about wrting a ff in english, but I'm afraid my english knowlegde is too bad for that. ^^
I'm not so into Arashi, unfortunately, I don't know which member is meant, when his name is mentioned. But in this story it doesn't matter at all, 'cause you can make the storyline very understandable even for outsiders. ^^
At least I do know Toma and Jun, and I like them very much, too. ^^
The breaks between the text is very good here, makes it easy to follow the text. ^^
Greetings!
I think your english is great - I had no problems with the vocabulary as a text of a native speaker would provide. ^^
I was also thinking about wrting a ff in english, but I'm afraid my english knowlegde is too bad for that. ^^
I'm not so into Arashi, unfortunately, I don't know which member is meant, when his name is mentioned. But in this story it doesn't matter at all, 'cause you can make the storyline very understandable even for outsiders. ^^
At least I do know Toma and Jun, and I like them very much, too. ^^
The breaks between the text is very good here, makes it easy to follow the text. ^^
Greetings!
