My dear death Fox

I have to say that I am quite impressed by your written english - you have a very intriguing writing style.

This was about the second time I ever read KuramaxKarasu. It is an extremely difficult combination, but I think you managed to catch escpecially Karasus character very well. Questions arise like at what time this is happening (since Kurama is able to transform without the potion, but he seems to be inferior to Karasu) but Karasus insanity is well displayed.

I'm disappointed in Hiei, though^^* I can't respect him in that fic. Being the big softie he is inside, I have a hard time believing he would watch Kurama getting raped and murdered, even without a call for help - especially since he is his lover in this story. (I always remember that time in the dark tournament when Hiei was ready to go berserk for Kuramas sake, that time he was locked up in medicals.)

I really liked the interaction between the characters - the reference Kurama is making when he tells Hiei "Since when do I need help?" was my favorite moment and I think the interaction with Shiori is pretty in character. Also the whole scene in Kuramas school; I was waiting for Yusuke to show up the whole time... if something like that happens in the city, I'm sure he would have heard of it through gossip, too.

The end... well, not much to say. 'course I don't like that Kurama is dead... but with all those wounds it almost wasn't imaginable otherwise... *sigh* Good thing the god of death is a toddler.

I would like to see more of you in future.^__^ This world needs more YYH.