Death Throes of Passion

> in your english version he says "Thanks for waiting" in german it would be "Danke fürs Warten" but you wrote "Sorry für die Wartezeit"
> is this intentional?
>
> and I prever would say "Jetzt können wir bis zum Tod kämpfen" or "Jetzt können wir uns bis zum Tod bekämpfen" not "...auf den Tod kämpfen"

Yup, it was intentional--I googled "Danke für warten" (I didn't know about the s or the capital) and didn't get any results so I just went with the easier line. But thank you for the correction!

What's the difference between having 'uns' there and not having it there?

> Yup, it was intentional--I googled "Danke für warten" (I didn't know about the s or the capital)

"fürs Warten" is the short form of "für das Warten" in this case "Warten" is a capital

there are some other short forms like
zum --> zu dem
zur --> zu der


> What's the difference between having 'uns' there and not having it there?

'Sie bekämpfen sich'= they fight at each other and 'Sie kämpfen'= they fight
When you use 'bekämpfen' you need 'uns' like the 'they' because it's a battle between those two...It's hard to explain... ahmmm...'bekämpfen' refers to fight against something in order to defeat / to stop them.

> Yup, it was intentional--I googled "Danke für warten" (I didn't know about the s or the capital)

"Das Warten" is a nominalized verb

Thanks for all your explanations! I think I get the uns thing now :D

> Autsch...
> Da bin ich ja mal gespannt :)
>
> Ich mag deinen Stil und freu mich drauf, wenns weitergeht ♥

(I hope your german is better than my english, yet ;) In other words: I really like your style and hope getting to read a few sheets more soon♥ )

> > Autsch...
> > Da bin ich ja mal gespannt :)
> >
> > Ich mag deinen Stil und freu mich drauf, wenns weitergeht ♥
>
> (I hope your german is better than my english, yet ;) In other words: I really like your style and hope getting to read a few sheets more soon♥ )

It's still horrible as you can probably tell xD Thanks for the translation (and the compliment, haha)! I can't figure out "Da bin ich ja mal gespannt" at all--google tells me it means 'Because I'm curious', but that doesn't seem to make sense with the smiley face. Now I'm curious as to what you meant xD

> I dind't get it too
>
> here I would say >Was hast du vor?< instead of >Was planst du?<

Does that mean "What are you doing?/What are you going to do?" I really do mean "What are you planning"--is there a better way to say this that means the same thing, or is it just weird to ask such a question in German?

Also, thank you for all your help in correcting the other pages! :DDD

> > I dind't get it too
> >
> > here I would say >Was hast du vor?< instead of >Was planst du?<
>
> Does that mean "What are you doing?/What are you going to do?" I really do mean "What are you planning"--is there a better way to say this that means the same thing, or is it just weird to ask such a question in German?

Yes it means "What are you doing?/What are you going to do?" I think it's more colloquial than asking someone "What are you planning".